This comic was a bit of an experiment.  I gave myself 1 day to invent and produce an entire comic.  I narrowed it down to this text and came up with the layout. I thought I was liking it until the end, where  I could see it just wasn’t working.  But I was tired, disappointed and grouchy so I just finished it up.

I think the trouble is that it looks slapdash when I actually planned it out… including trying out different styles of lettering. It was disappointing when the end result looked like I put no effort into it.  But maybe I had too high expectations for 1 day of work.